求翻译：可许老先生对以上两种译文的第二行都不满意。第一种多了两个音节，主语和宾语但到了次序；第二种更散文化，读来也不上口。在《唐宋词三百首》中，作者有该以如下是什么意思？

Can Mr. Xu Lao second row of the above two translations are not satisfied. The first version has two syllables, subject and object, but to the order; second, more prosaic, the read is not catchy. Ci three hundred, of the order is as follows

License for the above gentleman two translations of the first 2 rows are not satisfied with. The first is more than two syllables, and Yitzhak Rabin in Arabic, but to the order; the first 2 of a culture, it does not, read more. In 300 the tang and Song word first, the author of the in the following

But Venerable Xu is unsatisfied to above two kind of translation second itinerant.But the first kind of two syllable, the subject and the object arrived the order; The second kind disperses the culture, reads not the upper opening.In "Tang Song jambic verse 300", the author has should by as follows

Old for both translations were not satisfied with the second line. The first two syllables, subject and object to the order; the second culture, nor read around. Of the 300 CI of Tang and Song dynasties, authors have the following

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